Find your manuscript’s right direction.

I love the way a word feels in my mouth. The way the combination of words form sentences and stories that live in my chest for days after turning the last page.

Why? Because when emotions run through a story like rivers, gliding over and breaking rocks and earth over time, it burrows into the reader and connects again and again.

That’s when they miss their train stop; stay up just 30 more minutes and 30 more minutes until the wee hours of the black night to consume your words.

You have a completed manuscript, half-completed, maybe a section that you want feedback on to make sure readers have that same “can’t put it down” experience.

Your pages can receive an intimate review for:

• Plot holes, inconsistencies, etc.

• Believability of characters and the situations that wreck and rock them

• Character development and story

• Organization and structure

• Consistent writing style

• Pacing that keeps the reader engaged instead of yawning and skimming through

• Unnecessary characters, prose, plot points

• Overuse of words, gestures, and descriptions  

• If your novel/excerpt makes a reader feel something. Will it entertain and teach them? Will your reader care?

• If it feels alive and awake

Why me?

My name is Tiffany Clarke Harrison, and my debut novel is BLUE HOUR.

It made several most anticipated lists including Ms. Magazine, was seen on Good Morning America’s book club for April 2023, listed on the Best Books of 2023 list by Vulture, and was 1 of 9 books on Barack Obama’s 2023 Summer Reading list.

I’ll be right there with you in the details of your manuscript, helping the characters and scenes come even more alive and keep readers connected.

The Experience:

• If necessary we’ll divide your submission into up to 3 sections (depending on length)

• One section at a time (because overwhelm isn’t welcome here), you’ll receive line notes and feedback in the margins of the document

• One 50-minute session for Q&A

• Downloadable recording of the session

The Investment: $200/1000 words
for a minimum of 3k words

You’re not here to throw just any words in front of an agent or into publication. You’ve worked too hard for that. See it through with an intimate line/developmental edit to help get the response of “I read it in one sitting” or “I couldn’t put it down” Or, a personal favorite, “That was powerful. I don’t know how to explain it, but I felt that in my stomach.”